The presentation was a great one. It was very formal and informative. The issue the group chose was a very significant one (perhaps one of the most important ones in our society). They did a really good job of bringing such a problem to the attention of everyone (or as many as possible). It was also very relatable to people, especially immigrants or those hate Trump. The information was organized in a way that it was easy to follow at all times. One of the thing I liked most about the presentation was that the group avoided assuming things. For example, they explained what deportation was and how the process works instead of assuming anyone who read would know what they were talking about from the get-go. Also, they explained to audience how their topic was societal and/or moral issue instead of thinking the audience would infer it from the other aspects of the presentation.
Another thing I really liked about the presentation was the quote that came at the beginning. For me, it was easy to make the connection between the quote and actual situation at hand; life is only rich and full for actual citizens, and never for the illegals of the country After their problem and the facts of it were clearly explained, they told the details of their app, the relations of the app to the problem, and, most importantly, how the app would solve their problem.
Now for the app. I loved the app. Keeping people informed about what is going on around is an important step to solving the problem. In addition, it was a great to have a page that was dedicated to letting people know what their rights are, and what they should do or say (or not do and say) in case of peril. They also followed up by having a page designed to help people find a lawyer who will help them through their case if they find themselves in a tight spot with ICE (or any other law enforcement). Explaining how citizenship worked was also a good call. The only clarification I needed was how they would go about acquiring lawyers to help people with their legal binds.
Overall, the presentation and the idea was a solid one. They tried to account for as many things as possible and mad little (if any) assumptions at all. If this app became real, I think it would be game changing for our society (hopefully our country).
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